“ I think what you said made a bunch of sense.
However, what about this? suppose you added a little information? I ain't saying
your information is not solid., however suppose you added a headline to possibly get people's attention? I mean blog topic is kinda boring.
You might look at Yahoo's home page and watch how they write article titles to
grab viewers interested. You might try adding a
video or a pic or two to grab people interested about
what you've written. In my opinion, it might make your website a little livelier. ”