“ I believe what you said was very reasonable.
But, what about this? suppose you composed a catchier post title?
I ain't saying your content is not solid, but what if you added something to possibly grab a person's attention? I
mean blog topic is a little boring. You should glance at Yahoo's home page and watch how they write article titles to grab
people to open the links. You might try adding a video or a related pic or two
to grab people excited about what you've got
to say. Just my opinion, it might make your posts a little bit more
interesting. ”