“ What you wrote made a ton of sense. However, what
about this? what if you were to write a awesome headline?
I am not suggesting your content is not solid, but suppose you added a post title that grabbed a person's attention? I mean blog topic is kinda
boring. You should look at Yahoo's home page and watch how they create post headlines to grab people to click.
You might try adding a video or a picture or two to get readers interested
about everything've written. In my opinion, it might bring your blog
a little bit more interesting. ”