“ I believe what you said made a ton of sense. However, what about this?
what if you added a little information? I am not saying your content isn't solid., but what if you added something that makes people want
more? I mean blog topic is a little vanilla.
You might look at Yahoo's front page and see how they create article headlines to get people
interested. You might add a video or a picture or two
to get people excited about what you've got to say. In my opinion, it might make your blog a little
bit more interesting. ”