“ What you published made a bunch of sense. But, think about this, suppose you added a little information?
I ain't saying your content isn't good, however what if you added a post title to maybe
grab people's attention? I mean blog topic is kinda vanilla.
You might glance at Yahoo's home page and see how they create article
titles to grab viewers interested. You might add a related video or
a pic or two to get people excited about what you've
written. Just my opinion, it could bring your posts a little bit more interesting. ”