“ I believe what you said was actually very logical. But, what about this?
what if you added a little information? I am
not saying your content is not good, however suppose you added
a post title to maybe grab people's attention? I mean blog topic is a little plain. You might peek at Yahoo's
home page and watch how they create news headlines to grab viewers to open the links.
You might add a related video or a related picture or
two to grab readers excited about what you've
written. Just my opinion, it could make your blog a little bit
more interesting. ”