“ I believe what you said was actually very reasonable. However, think on this,
what if you added a little content? I ain't saying your information isn't good., however
what if you added a title that grabbed a person's attention? I mean blog topic is kinda plain. You ought to peek at Yahoo's front
page and see how they write article titles to get viewers to open the links.
You might add a related video or a related pic or two
to get people excited about what you've written. In my opinion,
it could make your posts a little bit more interesting. ”