“ I think what you wrote made a great deal of sense. However, what
about this? suppose you added a little information? I ain't suggesting your information is not
solid., but suppose you added something that grabbed
a person's attention? I mean blog topic is kinda boring.
You might glance at Yahoo's front page and watch how they create news headlines to
grab people interested. You might add a related video or a related pic or two
to get readers interested about everything've got to say.
Just my opinion, it could make your posts a little livelier. ”