“ I think what you typed was actually very reasonable. But,
think about this, what if you were to write a
awesome headline? I ain't saying your content is not solid.,
but suppose you added a headline that makes people want more?
I mean blog topic is a little boring. You might glance at Yahoo's home page and see how they create
news titles to get people to click. You might
add a video or a picture or two to grab readers interested about what you've got to say.
Just my opinion, it could make your blog a little bit more interesting. ”