“ I think that what you composed was actually very reasonable.
But, think about this, suppose you were to write a awesome
title? I mean, I don't want to tell you how to run your website, but what if you added a headline to maybe get people's attention? I mean blog topic is a little plain.
You might peek at Yahoo's home page and note how they
create article titles to get viewers to open the links.
You might add a video or a picture or two to grab readers excited about what you've written. Just my opinion, it might bring your blog a little livelier. ”