“ I believe everything composed made a great deal of sense.
However, what about this? suppose you added a little content?
I am not suggesting your content is not good., however
suppose you added something that grabbed people's attention? I mean blog topic is a little vanilla.
You could look at Yahoo's front page and see how they create news headlines to grab viewers to click.
You might add a related video or a picture or two to grab
people excited about everything've written. In my opinion, it would make your blog
a little livelier. ”