“ I think what you published was actually very reasonable. But, consider this,
what if you added a little information? I mean, I don't want to tell you
how to run your blog, however what if you added a post title to
maybe get a person's attention? I mean blog topic is a little vanilla.
You should look at Yahoo's home page and
note how they write news headlines to grab people interested.
You might add a related video or a related picture or two to get people interested about everything've written. Just my opinion, it could bring your blog a little bit
more interesting. ”